Thursday, November 29, 2012

A Shitty Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some things makes us wise and Some things makes us bad
Sometimes you just wish, you should have listened to your dad
Sometimes you wonder of the things that you have with you
sometimes you just throw them, and bring yourself all new
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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 July 2021

On a fresh morning, looking for something that could inspire I end up seeing some fresh , some fresh on some fire. Adorable poem! Enchanting read. Superbly worded.5 Stars full

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Bharati Nayak 16 July 2021

A wonderful poem--I think you have written for many of us who have same feeling.Very often I feel what I write is trash while others are writing superbly.

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Yash Shinde 01 April 2014

lol, kanav you can work so good on such humourous pieces as well! ......loved this one...

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Karen Sinclair 09 December 2012

A perfect juxtaposition between humour and pain.... i think all who write or paint suffer the doubts terribly and get the collywobbles (love that word lol) but we get them and doubt our worth....i think the best thing to do sometimes is just walk away for a few hours days even weeks and return with a fresh head and often you realise you were just burnt out or comparing too much...tyvm karen

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Neela Nath Das 29 November 2012

No Kavita is right. This poem is very nice. I loved the rhythm.

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