Thursday, January 30, 2014

A Shitty Poem 2 Comments

Rating: 4.8

time, drowns quick, like a stone in sea
in a day 10 times why do you have to pee
if you want to save your time, you better listen to my every line
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Yash Shinde 05 April 2014

.............this made my day..........truly impressive.......lol

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Michael Riley Shutt 04 February 2014

You have done some terrific work. On a cold, empty, frigid Indiana night, this one made me laugh, and that is what I needed. Thank you for that, Kanav!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 31 January 2014

Why inept.? ....it's full of humour, full of romance, full of insights......just you need to crack it.........Kanav............ you are simply superb.........I enjoy reading your poems.....

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Dinesan Madathil 31 January 2014

Once Aswath Ramalingam had written a similar poem and it is your turn now Kanav What you have written here, I hope has given you a little break from taking up the usual stuff... There ends the matter.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 31 January 2014

p.s. peeing once a day is injurious to health: -)

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