time, drowns quick, like a stone in sea
in a day 10 times why do you have to pee
if you want to save your time, you better listen to my every line
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You have done some terrific work. On a cold, empty, frigid Indiana night, this one made me laugh, and that is what I needed. Thank you for that, Kanav!
Why inept.? ....it's full of humour, full of romance, full of insights......just you need to crack it.........Kanav............ you are simply superb.........I enjoy reading your poems.....
Once Aswath Ramalingam had written a similar poem and it is your turn now Kanav What you have written here, I hope has given you a little break from taking up the usual stuff... There ends the matter.
.............this made my day..........truly impressive.......lol