A Shitty Day's Redemption Comments

Well versed and descriptive poem Reverend! There is not much more that is as inspiring as a beautiful woman, be it visual or the more metaphysical realms.

Nice. I can relate.

very descriptive....could smell pretty perfume: p nice title

ooo thats so cool! every time i walk into a convenience store now, im gonna be all 'yay! here i am, brightening all the mens' days! ' i really liked the mood of this poem and your choice of words. and lucky for you i looked up 'wanton' on merriam-webster online yesterday! ..wait...never mind..ive forgotten again. i think ill go look it up. >.<

Sweet.

There's not many better things than seeing a beautiful women like you described, quite wonderfully by the way.

We all need something to appreciate when life gets a little hard to take. As always, keep up with your talent. Warm regards. P.S., I posted some stuff you might enjoy. Keep up the good work.

Excellent poem. I felt as though I was there and seeing through your eyes. Warmest regards, CJ

once again, well writen and who hasn't had a day like that

very well written, Jacob! You've conveyed a solid experience. I, too, get the whole thing. That's no mean feat.

By all means a very good poem.

First time I read this poem for amusement - but you've caught the whole atmosphere of the moment perfectly. Not a word out of place.