Wednesday, February 13, 2013

A Shipboard Romance (Sequel.No.3) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The man and woman met at a mall by coincidence
Though a chance meeting, it turned out to be of great relevance
The same sensation that once united them, they now had in exuberance
But each felt shy to divulge it through frank admittance
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2019

A brilliant expression has been made on shipboard romance relating to love and Valentine day. Interesting to read over and over again. The concluding lines are much impressive. A great work.10

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Simone Inez Harriman 13 June 2017

All the ingredients of a mature relationship based on mutual acceptance, tolerance and compliance. I love the romantic ending 10+

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Loke Kok Yee 13 May 2017

This poem is most entertaining I could not read it without blushing And it got me a little thinking There must be more to all this writing Thanks Valsa.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2016

By coincidence! ! Love and art. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 25 January 2015

Oscar Wild wrote, To marry oneself is to ruin oneself and is to purchase miseries at the cost of happiness. After reading this poem I say he was absolutely wrong. I say to marry oneself is to beautify oneself and is to purchase a heart at the cost of a heart. A great poem Valsa Ji...................10

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Chandra Thiagarajan 14 February 2013

A beautiful ending to the Shipboard Romance in the form of a fantastic monorhyme is very appealing.

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Neela Nath Das 14 February 2013

Marriage is the union of two hearts! Loved.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 February 2013

Good ending as expected! Nice to read this rhythmic poem!

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