A Shipboard Romance (A Sequel.No.2) Comments

entertaining and clever poem with an excellent sense of redundancy " in the 'acne'" of various words- creates a song of a repetition made of a grammatical function of language- very clever!

hey found things at variance. Into their lives, monotony and loneliness were crawling in alliance. the songs, the sunsets.. annoyance.. thank u for a factual description of a life after divorce. love is always a mystery. if one finds a proper love relationship, it is already a wonder. thank u. tony

But as days passed, they started feeling some annoyance That gradually grew into deep repugnance From what has been expected, they found things at variance. Into their lives, monotony and loneliness were crawling in alliance. . ....nice expression. A thoughtful poem shared.

The songs they heard! Thanks for sharing.

Day by Day, they found life going adverse And their loneliness growing fierce Deep down, they felt a great annoyance And longed for an immediate deliverance A thoughtful poem................10

Headed towards an end unexpected, but still giving a chance for practicality of things very much assumable their story proceeds... Your interim works too might have a say over here Madam

it would b good if the sequel stop here caz i dont wanna c them pair again..... how truly these words are; marraige is a Farce.... how can a soul b fetter in such chains? nicely toned a dilmma of socail life Man r born free..... let him/her enjoy

They have spiralled in displeasure and in discourse could this not lead to some remorse where in each others company they are forced to retreat and perhaps a rapprochement could rekindle an old spark. The third instalment will be keenly sought.

Really you will keep me waiting for the next part.Very interesting.

Again a wonderful monorhyme poem, a sequel to the first Shipboard Romance is enchanting! Awaiting the continuity of the poem.