Monday, April 30, 2018

A Ship In A Bottle Comments

Rating: 5.0

It sits there on the sideboard
Or on the mantle shelf,
And after such a long time
You don't notice it yourself.
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Neil Stewart McLeod
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Mahtab Bangalee 26 May 2018

excellent innovative job you are done- It takes months to finish Doing a little every night, I had my children watching And remarking at the sight nice 10+++

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Shukrea Mahtab, Thank you so much for taking another look!

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Janet Boston 02 May 2018

Love this Neil and you read it really well.

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Thank you Janet. All for the good cause, the love of poetry!

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 May 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Neil S. M. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Thank you Jazib, what a nice start to my day. I will indeed read your poem. Best wishes, Neil McLeod

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