Wednesday, October 11, 2006
A Shiny New Fish Comments
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It started in the basement
A cold and dark mildew cave
With exit blocked and candle lit
Exists primal seclusion
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Sydney Daniels
18 October 2006
Great write, Jack. Starts dark but ends a little whimsically. Who knew?
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7/20/2025 8:37:40 AM # 1.0.0
What a wonderful, original idea and so well an poetically-expressed. It's a lovely piece of poetry. Just beautiful, with superb imagery.10/10