A Shining Star Comments

that is a nice poem, , , i like it.its very simple and on point

Stars are amazing at night but shy when sunlight taking over, but that make me miss and wait to glare them...and u are the star too, the way u write u shine a lesson like a star do but the different is this poem still can shiny in the whole day (day and night) because u make it eternal by words...lovely poem i love it! ...

it's sounds like a northern star

Light yet enshrines sky of blue As true friend enlightens sorrow Grim of pain seems to bespeckle to dust innocence of love whispers beauty divine mortality of hope riffles deep by fear bubbles heart never cries as soul being truly endeared........most passionate write, yet emotively ingenious,10+++, thanks for sharing

The poetic wording of this poem is so well penned. Loved the read! Enlightening.; D

‘Bleeding wings/Beauty of God /And His mercy/Enlightening us.’ The bottom line of the poem placed on solid platform as finishing touch down… Thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

A shining star in the sky The light caressing our sorrows.... These two lines much for a total poetry. These two lines much for a catch to the reader. And the others the habitual writings a poet writes as a saint. Well, another contribution to the reader. Regards, 10 Apoet