Saturday, May 3, 2008

A Shilling In The Meter (Fun Poem 76) Comments

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Quick
put a shilling in the meter
let the sun come out to play.
The sun being expensive
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David Harris
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 May 2008

Some one is being kind this week, except for bank holiday of course it's been beautiful... Andy 10

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JoAnn McGrath 04 May 2008

oh if it were only that easy....there would be people putting coins in to get their sun...then we would be a bunch of dry bones looking for water I suppose

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Alison Cassidy 03 May 2008

David, you have called this a 'fun poem' but I read it differently. As a metaphor for hope in an impoverished world. Like the poor man's weekly punt on the horses or ticket in the sweep. Lovely poem. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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