Saturday, May 10, 2008

A Shift In Perception 2 Comments

Rating: 3.7

I used to hate colour yellow.
It made my complexion look sallow.
And reminded me of jaundiced eyes,
Stubborn stains that won’t go despite
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Mamta Agarwal
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Ershad Mazumder 08 September 2008

Politicos care for peoples perception.Perception is reallity not truth.Poets work for truth and imagination.

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Kesav Easwaran 06 August 2008

a changing perception...a change for good...pleasing your mind...good write 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 August 2008

.....verses are thoughtful indeed........10+

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 27 June 2008

Hello Mamta, it's amazing how one's perspective and perception can change. Great work! Loyd

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Rani Turton 14 May 2008

I enjoyed this one. The associative shift is very interesting indeed.

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Abha Sharma 10 May 2008

So much yellow and still so beautiful…now this is how a poet assimilates facts and brings beauty to the eyes of the reader…well composed

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Raj Nandy 10 May 2008

Your last two lines concludes the poem beautifully! -Raj Nandy 10 May 08

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Raj Nandy 10 May 2008

The last two lines sums up the poem beautifully. -RajNandy 10 May08

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Raj Nandy 10 May 2008

The last two lines sums up the poem beautifully. -RajNandy 10 May08

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Raj Nandy 10 May 2008

The last two lines concludes the poem beautifully! - Raj Nandy

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Raj Nandy 10 May 2008

The last two lines concludes the poem beautifully! - Raj Nandy

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Raj Nandy 10 May 2008

The last two lines concludes the poem beautifully! - Raj Nandy

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Raj Nandy 10 May 2008

The last two lines concludes the poem beautifully! -Raj Nandy

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Raj Nandy 10 May 2008

The last two lines sums up the poem beautifully. -Raj Nandy 10May 08

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Vidi Writes 10 May 2008

Regarding perception it said - 'Perception is strong and sight weak. In strategy it is important to see Distant things as if they were close And to take a distanced view of close things.” Through perceptions We bear the heat of Sun Find solace in Moon Pray with falling star. Perceptions make things easier To perceive is difficult. Nice poem. Thank you.

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