Sunday, February 8, 2009

A Sheltered Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I was a teenager living at home
I rebelled against restriction of freedom
Church and cultural had written in stone.
But my parents were determined
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Monica May
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Carolyn Brunelle 09 February 2009

Wow. I absolutely love this poem Monica. No wonder you liked mine which is far less in depth. This is just beautiful.

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Greenwolfe 1962 08 February 2009

Well, this poem is a great way to start my day. It is a circular poem. I love it. This is what writing is all about. Taking the reader on a journey and returning them safely home. What a pleasure to read this! GW62

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James B. Earley 08 February 2009

A poignant introspection! Excellent.

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