A Shattered Soul Comments

I was left to bleed new life into our land. I must dig deep to carry on. Bleeding heart, pain, sufferings, thoughts, loneliness....... all expressed so well in this fine poem.. tony

I love this one Jeremy :)

I love this poem Jeremy

This brings to mind of the Native Americans being forced off their lands to reservations - A sad painful moment in history that continues to this day...... Excellent work!

Good job dear Jeremy!

Very emotional, filled with depth of the up most! 10+++++ KW

"Our crops failed to flourish on barren land. I was left to bleed new life into our land. "..Exquisite lines!!Amazing!

Good write, Jeremy. Emotional to the feel of the 'shattered' self. But I am glad you will rise up after the fall: 'I must dig deep to carry on.'

Good write, Jeremy. Emotional to the 'shattered' self. Yet, I am glad you will rise up after the fall: 'I must dig deep to carry on.'

I have translated the poem into greek where it sounds beautifully too.So I do publish its translation.

Love how u express what you went through and what you feel at the same time. So much power behind the words, well done! Great read!

Seems we have had similar experiences, lol

That's horrible, you gave up on someone you love How could anything you said be true If you were fickle to let her go?

I really love this poem it draws you in very greatly written

Powerfully strong and delicately stated emotions. Shards of my love lay scattered around our world. Beautifully sad, steeped in sorrow's depths. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Well written. Can feel your...shattered pain.....

Wow strong and betiful

Loved your piece. Great work. All the best