Wednesday, November 7, 2012

A Shattered Soul Comments

Rating: 4.5

A Shattered soul
boxed behind impenetrable walls
alone with the notions that come at night
trapped by the fear of shadow filled corners
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Spencer Smith 08 November 2012

Great job applying emotion to your poem. Just grammatical mistakes is all. If you edit the capitalization and punctuation, it would be even better

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