Thursday, April 23, 2009

A Shattered Life Comments

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I look around at a shattered life
that I was trying to build.
Meddlers came in and ruined
the comforting solace I had.
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David Harris
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Alison Cassidy 25 April 2009

This one sounds personal David. And you're right. Some people seem to find pleasure in tormenting others, though I believe that there is pain underpinning all the malice and cruelty in people's negative actions. That deep down, they are perpetuating that which they themselves have suffered. Your title is very compelling and your poem speaks your truth with conviction and passion. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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