Saturday, September 22, 2012

A Shattered Dream Comments

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i searched a dark hole
with the aim to retrieve a soul
to combine with it and become whole
though it was an imagination to achieve such a goal
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fallen angel <3 24 September 2012

love this poem great wrighting the feeling i get from it is exactly how i feel

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Chyna Parker 22 September 2012

The last two lines wrap it up perfectly! nicely done

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