A Shared Fate Comments
Things go wrong
Often enough
In this not so perfect world
While we are trying to make it
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Excellent expression.But no body in this world is is perfectly perfect.wrongs are always committed, but but should lessened over time to move towards almost perfection.
A perfect day A perfect life A perfect dream......beautiful
And Congratulations! .. On poem of the day! .. God bless! ..
Ever such beautiful heartfelt words! .. Ever so beautifully expressed! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
A fascinating piece of poetry! Dear Ruta Apa, you are a talented poetess and an honest lover of poetry! Please keep good work up!
The last stanza leaves an impression behind. Loved it. Loved the empathy emphasized in the poem. Heartiest congratulations on your poem being selected the 'Member Poem of the Day'!
Congrats! A nice thought and a lovely message for the two fighting neihbors, when they will forget the past and move forward with a hand in hand.
Imperfection is a blessing in disguise...rationally proved in your great poem......congratulations, Ruta for your poem being selected as the poem of the day......
A beautiful and perceptive poem. It conveys kindness. Liked the last stanza. Congratulations!
Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Without empathy there is no hope for the human race to live to its fullest capacity. Great write, Ruta!
Ruta, your poem is really a great poem. This is truly full of empathy. I appreciate you many times.
Ruta, I think this is a good poem. I almost passed it up, but I’m glad I didn’t. I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Sincerely, Glen Kappy
The sad reality of living a life. Through joy and sorrow life goes on. A very heart touching poem indeed. 'An invisible chain That pulls and tugs As things happen to us Others' pain reflected in our eyes Our pain reflected in others '....is so nice. Congrats.
Painted with empathy... Thnx for sharing....10 and more ....... You may like to read my poems too... Naila
Ruta, such a marvelous poem of the day... congrats for being chosen....10+++++
Thank you, Bernard, for reading my poems and the encouragement you have so often given.
An outstanding poem about empathy. Excellent write by someone who appears to be very empathic. Ruta, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!
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7/18/2025 10:30:13 PM # 1.0.0
Very true of life written beautifully.