Thursday, February 19, 2009

A Shadow Passing By. Comments

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Goodbye, goodbye, noisy city

I have had enough of your crowded streets,
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 April 2009

Goodbye, Goodbye noisy city, i am tired by your noise and velocity I will go jungle, to sing melodious ditty.............Good Write.....

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Greenwolfe 1962 19 February 2009

A truly beautiful description. This reminds me of my poem THE ROUGH HEWN FACE OF GOD. This was well written. Plain and clear in its meaning. I also liked the ending. Every poem needs an ending, though some never have one. This kind of poem liberates the mind. GW62

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