Saturday, January 5, 2013

A Shadow Nightmare Comments

Rating: 4.8

In the middle of chilly dark night
Lost in vicinity of darkness
Earnestly waiting for a dawn
I saw someone at my back
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Kishor Pathak
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Kishor Pathak 07 January 2013

Thank you all for spending your precious time and acknowledging the work.

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Payal Parande 05 January 2013

a story that tell the true meaning of fear and give a morel.....brilliant sir the words are like knife yet they are gentle too bravo indeed

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Vikrant Jog 05 January 2013

Dude, Excellent though. This shows the thing we fear is our own terror. Good write. Keep it up

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Jahan Zeb 05 January 2013

very nicely narrated Kishore. You created the scene nicely. I liked the title as well. Sure, You have got talent and will write for us more. I liked the ending.

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Gajanan Mishra 05 January 2013

Shadow nightmare. thanks for the poem. good one.

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Hazel Durham 05 January 2013

A tense, dark and very atmospheric poem so beautifully written! We all have a dark side it's part of being human if we embrace our faults and with God's help we can overcome anything! Excellent write!

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Kishor Pathak

Kishor Pathak

Nagpur, Maharashtra, India
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