Tuesday, July 12, 2011

A Shadow In The Darkness Comments

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A shadow in the darkness, a phantom in the night
Though you can feel it's presence, it remains just out of sight
A ghost, a ghoul, a goblin, a demon, some kind of fiend
It remains shrouded in shadow, identity not yet gleaned
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Tim Vallie
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C.R. Clark 13 July 2011

I'm not sure why these feelings come out in darkness, but they do. You have expressed here a very common occurance and you've done so very eloquently.. I really like this poem. Indeed a 10. Thanks Richard

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Tim Vallie

Tim Vallie

Duluth Minnesota
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