Friday, June 1, 2012

A Shadow In A Festival Comments

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As the sun goes down and the lights begin to fade,
A blaze of red shadows the sky
And a fountain of lights sparkle to a great cascade.
I'm lost in a world where silence fills all time.
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Linda May Fox
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Saadat Tahir 18 August 2012

hey do you know...you write very well... :) loved and enjoyed.....thanx for the share....read it twice to soak in the effect And a fountain of lights sparkle to a great cascade. I'm lost in a world where silence fills all time........ lovely and the last line too sat ***

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Valerie Dohren 19 June 2012

Lovely poem, well written and rhymed.

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Gaylord Munemo 03 June 2012

pure, perfect and great diction.

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