A Shadow / एक परछाईं (Hindi Translation Of A Poem By Henry Wadsworth Longfellow) Comments

Very good translation, I must say. Thanks for sharing it.

One can easily see how rich is your ability to render something in Hindi. Each line is exquisitely chiseled, it is hard to pick one or two. Wonderful.

Thank you Rajnish ji for translating this poem into beautiful Hindi.

मैंने अपने आप से पूछा- कहीं अगर मैं मर जाता तो इन बच्चों का क्या होता? समझ नहीं पाता हूँ मैं A wonderful translation of a poem that questions the fate of children and their future, specially, if they their guardians are gone. I have seen this situation in many families. That's where i feel God plays a big role. I feel there is hope and survival for everyone born on this earth. God takes care.We need to trust and have faith. ......10

A touching expression about the future of children is astutely delineated which is well translated in Hindi by you. I cite....अपनी सहायता व बेहतरी के लिये. उनका जीवन मैं मानता हूँ कि एक किताब की तरह है, जिसके मैंने अध्याय पढ़े हैं शुरू शुरू के. नहीं मगर मैं पढ़ पाता उनके सारे जीवन की रोचक औ' रोमांचक गाथा, खूबसूरती से भरी हुई और दुस्साहस से परिपूर्ण Nice work. Thanks for sharing.

They will find hope and strength as we have done. A nice translation.

You have chosen well among the many poems of Longfellow. It shows consideration for the children who would be orphans if he died. In the volume of their lives 'I have read/ But the first chapters'. Indeed the world is old, and it belongs to each succeeding living generation. (last two lines, I think) .

main soch main paD gaya kya hoga mere bachoN ka agar main mar gaya kya hoga unki kismat main tab jo ab apni kush-haali k liyay muj pe aas lagaey hain unki zindgi ki kahani baDi lambi hogi jis k kuch pehlay hi pannay main ne paDay hain aur baaki k sub main paD nahin paya....