A Shadow From The Past Comments

yeahh i like this. its really...dark. in a way. but its so..true. your a great poet and dont change it

i liked it^^, but it seems that you words were rushed in a way. Maybe if you pull out the feeling and draw them out our depiction of your poem would have a better meaning. =] A very good read^^

Yes, as well as being a good expression of feelings, this work has potential as a very good poem. Irene

its not that bad dude its pretty darn good just make sure u have the feeling come out so i can feel ur pain or ur feelings

David, A lost True love crushes all of us at one time or another. When the realization that the other person ' has nothing to apologize for ' you've come a long way towards healing

i agree with Sara, drastic memories like your memories are coming back it's a nice poem i enjoyed it

Hmm kind of a twist, much of a general realization of the guilt from the drastic memories. that pull you deeper and deeper into a hole, but the ending goes into a strange twist that makes the poem bright, thank you for everything. i guess its the same story throughout but seems sorta like a twist i reallly enjoyed it