A Shadow Comments

I am a shadow that born by the ray though few that heed..true painting thank

very touching poem. It reminds me of myself.. Happy new year my friend :)

Very nice, like this one quite a lot.

A shadow is inseparable! Wherever you go, it will follow you! A shadow can stay only with the light! A good write with deeper layers of meaning!

wonderful it is simple but it is still has deeper meanings

I like the way you have described the loyalty of our shadow that walks abreast all the time...I still be there, still faithful good use of words to describe the inconspicuous presence of our shadow....nice work

nice poem my friend

Quite like this. Good sum-up of a shadow.

nice to keep the hope til the next ray/ nice one

your shadow is a constant companion it is always hanging around. a good write.

Your shadow is always a constant presence. Whither you go it goes. You can't run nor hide from it. A very good write.

wild touches the heart, reflecting every inch that hold every breath......your such a balancing lines of poet i ever read....so smooth to recall the hook of survival....God bless a 10/10