Draw me in shadow.
The subtle darkness
that takes me down
towards the bottom
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Compelling control of another's perspective- fascinating! Commanding to be drawn in a shadow! There is nothing 'feeble' about the way Sally's poem makes a shadow into the Director of another's representation of her. Then she's building staircases with them, alluding to 'foothold.' Very Strong Poem!
A poem that is less light hearted than Plumb Plumb's typical high charm; this is sadder, heavier and pulls one deep in as like is what is happening with the shadow drawing one in.
Hi! Julia. The darkness comes with bi- polar disorder.I.rarely hit a high. Lovely to hear from you. Sally
Thanks for your input, Julia. Very much appreciated. Sally.