Wednesday, December 17, 2008

A Shade Of Pink Comments

Rating: 2.5

could my loved one ever forgive me
in that sin witch i so carelessly alowed to happen
i never thought that i could be so blind not even i could have seen
but now it is over will she ever love me again or will she too shun my touch
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these words are raw emotion...beautiful great job Unique

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**paris* forever forgotten** 18 December 2008

strong poem expressing your strong love for her, beautiful. keep it up. she'll be back to love you again. good things come to those who wait, an believe. ~paris

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Fiona Davidson 17 December 2008

Good strong poetry...thanks

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