Saturday, November 10, 2012

A Sexy Samba Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sweat trickles down my bare back.
It tickles as it wetly trails
To the base of my spine.
My hips sway,
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Ruby Honeytip
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Loved the subtle sensuality in the poem..

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Marvin Brato 06 October 2013

Sensual sentiments enhance with rhythmic expressive imagination!

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Khairul Ahsan 01 August 2013

Free flow of feeling, sure to harden many a thing!

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Terry O'leary 10 February 2013

Although it's winter here, reading this made me hot...very nice descriptive piece, Ruby... Terry

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Stevie Taite 24 November 2012

Amazing! Very very sensual! Cleverly done (wake up husband lol)

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Joseph Anderson 23 November 2012

Wowee! this sure raised my libido.A 10 plus for sensuality. A spirited write.Yeah, that was a great ending

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Lyn Paul 11 November 2012

Excellent Ruby, Thanks for sharing your great work

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Red O'mara 10 November 2012

And still no rude words. I think we're all wondering when you're going to declare which is which.

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