Thursday, June 19, 2014

A Sexy Lie Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is there anything more beautiful than she?
Leaving all other things and being her he,
I should watch her from the front, and from her back,
From top to bottom, the beauty and appeal of a sexy pack.
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Khalid Saifullah 28 December 2014

An amazing poem................10

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Valsa George 03 July 2014

So, a beautiful woman has inspired you to write a beautiful poem! ! With her lively image in mind, you, on wings of fantasy fly......! Enjoyed!

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Neela Nath Das 29 June 2014

A beautiful expression....................

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Sadiqullah Khan 28 June 2014

This is like a tribute and accepting woman as a source of inspiration. True, every man needs a woman.

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Kirti Sharma 24 June 2014

nice poem! ! i like it!

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Amitava Sur 21 June 2014

Akhtar vai - enjoyed this crispy and twinkling write up.

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V P Mahur 20 June 2014

Dear Bro, so nicely and elaborately expressed the passionate feelings of a man. Greta write. Thanks for your comments on my poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 June 2014

bitter is the truth and sweet is the lie, And it is not always like this.

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