On a stone wall, by the pavement
Annoyed and angry,
With daggers drawn at everyone
Sat he dejected and depressed.
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A heart touching poem, how cruel is the man! .........................10
Very touching and poignantly crafted.......Valsa....bringing subtle emotion to every line.....be it human or animal every mortal yearns for love badly.........a great piece rich with weighty morals..........
Valsa this beloved piece of writing is heart wrenching. The love of the dog for his master even though he was treated in the worst kind of way is very enlightening. In the same light we should love someone still even when they have mistreated us. Yes we can learn from animals. Even as humans we sometimes act no better than the animals do. An inspiring write in all its entirety.
with a plead to make a good poem by (editing) many lines are poetic But wagging its tail with a pleading look It began licking its master's hand
Great words with a touching message. This dog is immortalised now and for ever.
Very beautiful Valsa, to love those who hurt you is indeed a triumph.
Nice sermon the dog gave with his actions of love-too deep for words- to love others even after someone breaks your heart-What a lovely thought so beautifully couched! A deeply touching write which will be remembered for long.Thank you and kind regards. Chandra Thiagarajan
Dogs have a lot to teach us humans. A touching heart warming poem. Well done my friend!