Monday, November 19, 2012

A Sermon From The Wild Comments

Rating: 5.0

On a stone wall, by the pavement
Annoyed and angry,
With daggers drawn at everyone
Sat he dejected and depressed.
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Valsa George
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Dogs have a lot to teach us humans. A touching heart warming poem. Well done my friend!

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Akhtar Jawad 18 December 2014

A heart touching poem, how cruel is the man! .........................10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 01 August 2014

Very touching and poignantly crafted.......Valsa....bringing subtle emotion to every line.....be it human or animal every mortal yearns for love badly.........a great piece rich with weighty morals..........

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Patricia Grantham 06 September 2013

Valsa this beloved piece of writing is heart wrenching. The love of the dog for his master even though he was treated in the worst kind of way is very enlightening. In the same light we should love someone still even when they have mistreated us. Yes we can learn from animals. Even as humans we sometimes act no better than the animals do. An inspiring write in all its entirety.

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Heather Wilkins 21 August 2013

very touching a lovely write

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Lyn Paul 03 December 2012

Written with such emotion, felt sad reading these words.

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Anita Sehgal 03 December 2012

very touching.. such a lesson!

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Kee Thampi 23 November 2012

with a plead to make a good poem by (editing) many lines are poetic But wagging its tail with a pleading look It began licking its master's hand

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Great words with a touching message. This dog is immortalised now and for ever.

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Valerie Dohren 19 November 2012

Very beautiful Valsa, to love those who hurt you is indeed a triumph.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 19 November 2012

Nice sermon the dog gave with his actions of love-too deep for words- to love others even after someone breaks your heart-What a lovely thought so beautifully couched! A deeply touching write which will be remembered for long.Thank you and kind regards. Chandra Thiagarajan

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