A Serious Poem Comments

Interesting and intriguing and well written

I feel like the imagery here is jumping out and grabbing me by the tips of my hair and yanking me into your poem.

There is such a mixture of images here that no clear picture emerges from the myriad of word usages. The reader is left in the dark. GW62

made my mind creeping for awhile...nice imagery...10/10

Very eloquent manipulation of poetic prose and verse.

Your skill in maneuvering the labyrinth of the English language really is quite skillful. Well done, oh traveled one.