A Sequel To 'Dark Hypnotic Eyes' Comments

Temptations worth to try at Romance a myth to trance at All is well that end well Keep the level at breathing point Else you wil never catch with the day light. Dear Poet, We all humans have clicked at this point We all have our soar to that enticement Worth crossing hundred miles Myth or Truth, Lets hold on to the Pitch. This write is melody, I enjoyed.

really romantic- strong temptation to break the monotony, imagine the risk and regret. i really like it, first of your romantic poems i have read. it belongs to the realm of fantasy, we all have from time to time. Mamta

poet seems mesmerized by eyes...and readers too are helplessly taking a plunge.. shamiyana...of eyelashes... :))