Sunday, September 14, 2008

A Seperate Path Taken Comments

Rating: 5.0

She moans
I groan
both aggravated 'or the same ordeal
neither no where to go
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Stephanie Saba
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Vinod Kumar 11 January 2009

Right and fit parrallel track, very nice, the train can move swiftly without an accident, thank you for sharing the message oriented poem,10++, and keep writing if time allows.

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Ashley Horstman 04 October 2008

That poem was very nicely written

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Very nicely written. I loved it! Peace out, Lexi Baby

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Ben Bergeth 15 September 2008

very cool...i like this a lot

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