Wednesday, July 8, 2009

A Sensual Kiss Comments

Rating: 4.8

Lips sumptuous you have in a way quiet,
Excites me to consume them with a kiss
To give my heart a sensational riot
Of penchant wild, draws me into its abyss.
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Prashant Shaurya 26 December 2009

well sir, a kiss is a kiss anyways.. the best way to express your love for anyone... however big be the complications in our love life, a passionate kiss does the magic for you.. regards prashant

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this is really good..well done i enjoyed it

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Obinna Eruchie 01 December 2009

naphright naphright (12/1/2009 12: 14: 00 AM) the name of the poem said it, i felt the words literally

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 November 2009

‘To give my heart a sensational riot…’ Indeed ignites fire of love. Wow! What a nice poem? Great line like fireworks. Voted ten++ Ms. Nivedita. UK Cordially invite to read / comment and….my poems niv

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Emu Getachew 23 October 2009

This piece has movements that erupt into several moments…great imagination extremely vivid. Thanks

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Jack Williams 04 October 2009

Very, very rich imagery.

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Corey Threet 30 September 2009

Really great poem it reminds me of my poem 'Art of Kiss' and 'Sign of Kiss' You should check it out someday. But this is really great, great use of words and metaphors loved it. Thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! ! ~Xeniyah

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Anand Madhukar 11 September 2009

Passionate with some nice comparisons, a wondrful write.

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Original Unknown Girl 07 September 2009

Passion exudes from every line in this poem, your pen clearly packs a punch! HG: -) xx

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 31 August 2009

Such a beautiful poem of 'A sensual Kiss' sweet words used to describe a kiss...I love this poem much...women of the world appreciate being praise more by our counterpart.

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Deborah Cromer 24 August 2009

The right lips, from the right mouth can truly turn your world upside down. Kisses are beautiful and free themselves from the soul. Passion stems from the perfect kiss. Your poem gives meaning and warmth from the heart. Very beautiful. DC

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Seema Aarella 24 August 2009

A sensual kiss, sensationalised in words......Superb write! ! ! ! !

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Ershad Mazumder 23 August 2009

Its an excellant piece of love poem. But I felt it like report on a kiss. Make it more divine. It will become a eternal love poem.

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Myrtle Thomas 16 August 2009

I love how you describe the kiss of your lover as you have done.A very sweet loving way to compare it as a crystal.You have written a wonderful piece here.

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Vijay Gupta 15 August 2009

Juicy poem. Fantastic. I like it. Please read my new poem 'little bird', paradise discovered, twinkling star. thanks

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Darlene Belcher 12 August 2009

Reminds me of my first time... /sigh, such beauty and passion from just a kiss. such a thing is known to haunt you dreams until you have it again....a pleasent way to remember such events, Well done!

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Reshma Ramesh 04 August 2009

kiss at its most......well penned

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~ Jon London ~ 30 July 2009

Nice work my friend, the perfect capture of this loving moment.....well penned with thoughtful composition that has imagery of high quality...which adds to this wonderful piece the bonus impact 10+++

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Sadiqullah Khan 23 July 2009

Hmm, too good, I agree with Souza.10

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Obed Souza 22 July 2009

Sensual without being vulgar... Wonderful 10!

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