Lips sumptuous you have in a way quiet,
Excites me to consume them with a kiss
To give my heart a sensational riot
Of penchant wild, draws me into its abyss.
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this is really good..well done i enjoyed it
naphright naphright (12/1/2009 12: 14: 00 AM) the name of the poem said it, i felt the words literally
‘To give my heart a sensational riot…’ Indeed ignites fire of love. Wow! What a nice poem? Great line like fireworks. Voted ten++ Ms. Nivedita. UK Cordially invite to read / comment and….my poems niv
This piece has movements that erupt into several moments…great imagination extremely vivid. Thanks
Really great poem it reminds me of my poem 'Art of Kiss' and 'Sign of Kiss' You should check it out someday. But this is really great, great use of words and metaphors loved it. Thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! ! ~Xeniyah
Passion exudes from every line in this poem, your pen clearly packs a punch! HG: -) xx
Such a beautiful poem of 'A sensual Kiss' sweet words used to describe a kiss...I love this poem much...women of the world appreciate being praise more by our counterpart.
The right lips, from the right mouth can truly turn your world upside down. Kisses are beautiful and free themselves from the soul. Passion stems from the perfect kiss. Your poem gives meaning and warmth from the heart. Very beautiful. DC
A sensual kiss, sensationalised in words......Superb write! ! ! ! !
Its an excellant piece of love poem. But I felt it like report on a kiss. Make it more divine. It will become a eternal love poem.
I love how you describe the kiss of your lover as you have done.A very sweet loving way to compare it as a crystal.You have written a wonderful piece here.
Juicy poem. Fantastic. I like it. Please read my new poem 'little bird', paradise discovered, twinkling star. thanks
Reminds me of my first time... /sigh, such beauty and passion from just a kiss. such a thing is known to haunt you dreams until you have it again....a pleasent way to remember such events, Well done!
Nice work my friend, the perfect capture of this loving moment.....well penned with thoughtful composition that has imagery of high quality...which adds to this wonderful piece the bonus impact 10+++
well sir, a kiss is a kiss anyways.. the best way to express your love for anyone... however big be the complications in our love life, a passionate kiss does the magic for you.. regards prashant