Friday, February 10, 2012

A Senseless Stone Comments

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If you had ears
then it could not be hard
to make you hear me,
You don't have eyes
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Frank Okoth
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Simon Odhiambo 27 August 2012

Imagery at its best. well articulated.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 27 August 2012

Stubbornness in a stone's perspective. I like this Poem keep it.

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Eindaray Kyaw 27 August 2012

Great! ! You metaphorically say your love(I think she must have a poker face) a stone! I like this.

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Micah Ogberhie 16 July 2012

What an imagery frank. thought the poem will go deep enof to guide us to the object of comparison with a senseless stone. anyway...the semblance of 'unyielding' and 'unrsponsive' politicians to the plights of the governed could be a fitting symbol of a senseless stone...kudos man.

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Frank Okoth

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