Wednesday, November 2, 2011

A Sense Of Immortality Comments

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The truth has hid its ugly head from us
And now I'm caught in a lie
Will I die?
A sense of immortality has showed up
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Pete Rivera
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Pete Rivera 04 November 2011

Thankz =) And dont worry, I will continue to keep going =)

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Romeo Della Valle 04 November 2011

Bravo! Wow! Amazing and well penned write that is powerful in its content and beautiful in its rich imagery! Pete, you definitely got what it takes in the the Poetry World: TALENT, keep on going all the way to the top since you got what it takes! You only need courage and determination and obviously you got them both! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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