A Senryu On Life N Death Comments

A clever write on death...in between birth and death there is also the damage of the mortal sheath for various reasons on various circumstances still remaining to be alive...isn't it...thank you for this lovely write

wow...brilliant senryu indeed.......................

Alas! ..If only this armour was visible!

that death too resides well within the body..no armor can resist a lovely senryu