As I float around
in a semi dream state
I see a grassy field
with coloured flowers
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a good write Dave. even though it's just a dream it's real to me..
Just found this one, I think it`s beautiful, flowers always help to bring me peace.
Nice poem its so clear that the dreams are always more beautiful than the life's truths they are free.wish you all the best keep the good job up.blessings!
Beautiful Dave, we all need a dream to step into when life gets us down.
This reminds me of the times I am not quite asleep, nor quite awake; it really can be a time of some of the most fascinating dreams, and you are absolutely right, they do seem so real at times. A great poem Dave, like it very much.