Monday, April 16, 2012

A Semi Dream State Comments

Rating: 4.8

As I float around
in a semi dream state
I see a grassy field
with coloured flowers
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Dave Alan Walker
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Smoky Hoss 13 September 2013

This reminds me of the times I am not quite asleep, nor quite awake; it really can be a time of some of the most fascinating dreams, and you are absolutely right, they do seem so real at times. A great poem Dave, like it very much.

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 August 2013

A Good write. Beautiful dream....Loved reading it.

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Heather Wilkins 17 July 2013

a good write Dave. even though it's just a dream it's real to me..

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Gary Kedron 16 April 2013

Very nice poem... calming to the soul....

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Heather Wilson 18 June 2012

Just found this one, I think it`s beautiful, flowers always help to bring me peace.

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Sossi Khachadourian 29 April 2012

Nice poem its so clear that the dreams are always more beautiful than the life's truths they are free.wish you all the best keep the good job up.blessings!

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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

Beautiful...Dave..... gives me a serene feeling

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Valerie Dohren 18 April 2012

Beautiful Dave, we all need a dream to step into when life gets us down.

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Eric Cockrell 16 April 2012

the soul seeking peace.... bathing in stillness! good one!

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

Pudsey, Leeds
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