Friday, September 9, 2016

A Selfie Of My Self - 4 Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm just a cloud
Wandering in the sky
In quest of a place
Where I can stay.
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Seema Devi Sharma
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2) P Kunhiraman Nair was a great poet in Malayalam, who wandered from place to place and was never comfortable staying at one place. Your poem reminds me of both Poets "P" and Aattoor. Thank you

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Malayalam Poet late Aattoor Ravi Varma has written " ഞാനിന്നാ മേഘരൂപന്റെ /ഗോത്രത്തിൽ ബാക്കിയായവൻ" naming renowned poet P Kunhiraman Nair ‘Megharoopan" who dons the shape of a cloud..

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 March 2018

With a sweet flow the poem spills your emotion in a beautiful way. Loved it.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 09 October 2017

A drop of tear dries up in such loneliness.Nice poem After Summer Winter comes.Hope is the cool breeze.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you revered Sir for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations.

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Sanghamitra Nayak 25 September 2017

I'm just a cloud Wandering in the sky In quest of a place Where I can stay. Great poem Didi, Nicely penned. 10++++for it.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you Mitra for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 15 September 2017

A Simple poem with lots of expressions.Life is all about knowing oneself more than the world. Keep up the good work.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 02 December 2017

Thank you Sir for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 15 September 2017

A Simple poem with lots of expressions. Keep up the good work.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you Abhimanyu Sir for these kind words. Thanks for the lovely inspirations.

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Sabita Sahoo 05 September 2017

I'm just a cloud Wandering in the sky In quest of a place Where I can stay. Chilly at night, Hot at day, Sand doesn't burn Grief does slay. Beautifully penned poem deserving 10+++++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you Sabita dear for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations.

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Seema. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you Sir for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations. Yes I would.

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Anita Aparajita Das 17 August 2017

I'm just a cloud Wandering in the sky In quest of a place Where I can stay. No where on this planet Ever do I see, A place so warm and Cosy to welcome me. Great poem dear..So he made you a poetess at last..getting along the same edge Rimi dear, huh? Thanks.10 for this huge try.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you Neetu Didi for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations.

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Bharati Nayak 28 June 2017

I hate myself Because I'm straight I'm but a daisy In the noiseless desert. Nothing except sand Surrounds me Friend have long Gone from me. Chilly at night, Hot at day, Sand doesn't burn Grief does slay. - - - -Written with wonderful poetic skill the anguish of heart when one feels lonely and friendless- - - Thanks for sharing.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you Bharati Mam for these kind words. Thanks for the great inspirations.

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Kishore Kumar Das 24 June 2017

From the aimless cloud to the tired padestrian in a desert, your wonderful poem is a reality........but then the journey has to be continued with love..with the blessings of God.......thank you for sharing this beautiful poem....

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you my respected Sir for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations for me.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 September 2016

Nothing except sand Surrounds me Friend have long Gone from me. Chilly at night, Hot at day, Sand doesn't burn Grief does slay. Beautiful poem with a good sense of poetry. Hatred kills. Keep away from it.10 for the poem. Subhas

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you Sir for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations and the great advices.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2016

In search of a place! But, don't hate yourself. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 07 December 2017

Thank you my respected Sir for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations.

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