I'm just a cloud
Wandering in the sky
In quest of a place
Where I can stay.
No where on this planet
Ever do I see,
A place so warm and
Cosy to welcome me.
I hate myself
Because I'm straight
I'm but a daisy
In the noiseless desert.
Nothing except sand
Surrounds me
Friend have long
Gone from me.
Chilly at night,
Hot at day,
Sand doesn't burn
Grief does slay.
In search of a place! But, don't hate yourself. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
2) P Kunhiraman Nair was a great poet in Malayalam, who wandered from place to place and was never comfortable staying at one place. Your poem reminds me of both Poets "P" and Aattoor. Thank you
Malayalam Poet late Aattoor Ravi Varma has written " ഞാനിന്നാ മേഘരൂപന്റെ /ഗോത്രത്തിൽ ബാക്കിയായവൻ" naming renowned poet P Kunhiraman Nair ‘Megharoopan" who dons the shape of a cloud..
With a sweet flow the poem spills your emotion in a beautiful way. Loved it.
A drop of tear dries up in such loneliness.Nice poem After Summer Winter comes.Hope is the cool breeze.
Thank you revered Sir for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations.
I'm just a cloud Wandering in the sky In quest of a place Where I can stay. Great poem Didi, Nicely penned. 10++++for it.
Thank you Mitra for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nothing except sand Surrounds me Friend have long Gone from me. Chilly at night, Hot at day, Sand doesn't burn Grief does slay. Beautiful poem with a good sense of poetry. Hatred kills. Keep away from it.10 for the poem. Subhas
Thank you Sir for these kind words. Thanks for the inspirations and the great advices.