A Selfie Of My Self - 2 Comments

I see my friends who ran away Even the closest did not wait, For me to take a breathe And then to start again. Nice poem dear poet. 10+++

Nothing but emptiness do prevail Befriend me and my soul, When cloud of despair start blurring my goal. Nicely penned. Thanks Seema.10++++

My heart has turned An empty vessel That can now sound Much of my past. Beautiful poem, worthy of being awarded 10+++++

It is seen in present society that near, dear, friends, companios, brothers or sisters are often envious when one is in progress and he has to proceed ahead alone. Dear Seema, you have so nicely inscribed this here. Let it be quoted some lines... I saw my brothers staying back While I could proceed No where in the dark. Only to try just another road. Beautiful poem with touching expression. Thanks for sharing.

I see my friends who ran away Even the closest did not wait, For me to take a breathe And then to start again. Beautiful poem dear Rimi... Thanks.

I saw my brothers staying back While I could proceed No where in the dark. Only to try just another road. At bad times closest among the closest leave you alone to die. True. 10 for this nice poem.