Sunday, November 20, 2005

A Secret That Seeks For Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish I could find the right words
and my lost courage..
I wish I could tell you how much you mean to me
and that days seem lifeless with out you
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Georgios Venetopoulos 30 January 2013

It is a confession in free verse. Sensitive write, with humbleness on behalf of the authoress. Thank you for it.

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Manonton Dalan 27 September 2008

i alaways be by your side as we watch ebbs and flow of tide breathe free as wind blow cause i never leave you thanks md.

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Duncan Wyllie 08 June 2006

Beautyiful, again you show us such a lovely way about you, Love Duncan x

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Peter Rodenby 08 February 2006

i liked this one too the last verse in particular is very a good ending

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Ronberge . 04 December 2005

I enjoyed this one too. Well done 'Blue Sunflower' Amicalement votre, Ronberge.

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Uriah Hamilton 25 November 2005

This a very beautiful love poem, thanks for sharing this one. I love the name Blue Sunflower for some reason!

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Seán O' Muiriosa 24 November 2005

Ivy, another great poem! I love the way you go into the depths of a relationship between two people and describe the feelings vividly. It's an amazing gift you have. Best wishes, Seán

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