Sunday, February 8, 2015

A Secret Prayer Comments

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Oh Lord of the Worlds,
If you permit me,
I wish to make a solemn prayer,
That I wish to take my laptop
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Khairul Ahsan
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Khairul Ahsan 15 March 2015

@Angell Afinowi, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving your thoughtful comment there. Your interpretation of the poem is spot on!

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Clarence Prince 15 March 2015

Because you are such a godly person I don't think that you'll be lying in the grave, Khairul Ahsan! I think that you'll be with the Lord! Thanks for sharing!

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Khairul Ahsan 29 April 2020

Thank you, @Clarence Prince, for this uplifting comment. Much obliged.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 February 2015

Like the solar charger that we have here, Grant me a device that will charge in darkness, And some plugs and sockets in the walls of the grave.- - Very nicely envisioned. Many thanks sir. Keep on composing.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 April 2020

Thanks for the inspiration, @Kumarmani Mahakul. Much appreciate your reading and the kind comment.

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