Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
Sunday, October 2, 2011

A Secret Of Nature! (Truth Hurts) Comments

Rating: 4.8

here comes the moon,
cheating with the stars when the sun is not arround,
however, it is a marriage that was never atall meant to be,
because the sun comes back home everymorning,
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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)
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Swetha Vanakayalapati 22 June 2012

:) ........mmm.......still? ? ...oh thats rather a true grief song! ! its a beautiful concept you hv interwoven....spectacular ! !

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 November 2011

kulena mfana bewuphethe ukotini ukrosha, wenza esihle isibhalala lesi! ! ! ....ha haha!

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(De Va) 09 November 2011

I really like this poem, but....I so often see the sun and moon together, but never the sun and stars...so...it seems that the moon cheats on the stars with the sun...hmmmm...is so very thought provoking..ty for a beautiful write....blessings...deva

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Soulistical The Poet 18 October 2011

ha ha ha WOW! WOW! you kept me thinking, :) :) :) :) :)

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Adeline Foster 06 October 2011

True, true, woven into a very deep poem. read mine, - Home Is - Adeline

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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