Tuesday, January 17, 2006

A Secret Love Comments

Rating: 4.1

A secret love inspired by beauty
But denied by another lover.
A plan conspired in darkness
To possibly give him a second chance.
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Joshua Pickron
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Aj Whitten 18 January 2006

Wow! what can I say about this poem that hasnt already been said about Afhganistan? But no, seriously, it was good, and nice, and foreign, and..............................yeah! by the way we are working saturday

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Neisha Williams 17 January 2006

Interesting poem, Josh. Who exactly is shot? The woman's significant other? Slightly morbid, but nicely executed. No pun intended :)

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