A Secret Comments

Easy flow. Nice thoughts. A lot of beauty in the poem.

Full of passion and honesty. It is always beautiful to write on this theme and pour out the personal dimension in dealing with the subject. Very good start!

I agree with Sandra Feldman (she's a wonderful poet) there is a PERFUME OF MYSTERY about this poem, and it's very appropriate because the poem contains SECRETS which must be treated with care and wonder. You state one of life's harsh truths at the beginning, that is, one of life's great blessings - TRUE LOVE - does not bless everyone. Must it be so? Why? Those are impossible questions to answer but your poem by presenting an individual example of love - secret, sensitive, tentative, waiting - makes us feel the wonder of it all, even though we may never fully understand it.

a different poem in its context....keeps one guessing and has an expectant aura about it.... nice write liked

Beautiful love poem blessed enough to use correct and meaningful words of emotions that have inner awareness and beautiful emotions to one self to be liking to be loved be it by nature, god, or any thing like idolseeking the ultimate truth of love. Really it is a will of god says the poet and poem is so nice and recited with such goodness.When we go through great poems of great world poets including Kalidas we can see so much love and affection in their poems and having originality of words..

Beautiful love poem blessed enough to use correct and meaningful words of emotions that have inner awareness and beautiful emotions to one self to be liking to be loved be it by nature, god, or any thing like idolseeking the ultimate truth of love. Really it is a will of god says the poet and poem is so nice and recited with such goodness.When we go through great poems of great world poets including Kalidas we can see so much love and affection in their poems and having originality of words..

Wonderful read Nice sharing

Excellent flow of words- nice penning

Dear Mallika, I can Just say 'WAO' Your heart is full of sweet loving thoughts and you sprayed it all over your poem with great and delicate care. Thanks for this nice poem.

Never too late for love that's for sure pity man could not have the powerful love of the humble dog, would we not be so happy...enjoyed the journey in the poem...regards

A poem that you have to feel more than understand. It has an exquisite perfume of mystery about it. Very different. Liked it., thank you