A Secret Comments

This was very well written...i know the pain that you described all too well...great job!

You are a champion. Your poem will help meny people who have gone through this sad reality. Keep on choosing the mountain.

oh dear this is a sad poem........if this really happened to u...u should go to the police dear.....well penned

Kyla, is this for real! ?

This is an excellent piece of work...10+

Wow! A good poem moves the reader, and you most certainly did me~I pray for your soul to be healed by God's hand. Please tell someone who can help see that this doesn't happen to someone else. Nobody deserves that kind of pain..God Bless~Carol

jeeze your only 12? ? ? you write really good keep up the good work dont let your poems go to waste you really should look into writing a book Love Always Heather

Your only twelve and writing that good? Geeze! You got talent girl! This wont be a hobby for you much longer once some big time person comes and reads this. They will be like 'Huh, this girl has talent...Maybe we should ask her if she wants to make a book with her poems.' =) You got talent, and your not letting it go to waste I can see. =) Keep it up! Peace out, Lexi Baby

wow. this is written really well. good job chicka.

wow this poem is so deep. i love it. i felt a certain way. as if that was done to me. you have a way of writing something and making people feel it. this is one of the best poems i have ever came across. great job

yes i found this poem very intersting and i liked the way u used ur words but is this really true?