Tuesday, August 26, 2008

A Secret Comments

Rating: 5.0

My first day of school started with laughs and stares.
Giggles and pointing they didnt care.
I clearly was new as if that changed a thing.
Nobody cares what happens to me.
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Silence Dogood
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Ashley Davis 13 July 2009

This was very well written...i know the pain that you described all too well...great job!

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You are a champion. Your poem will help meny people who have gone through this sad reality. Keep on choosing the mountain.

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

oh dear this is a sad poem........if this really happened to u...u should go to the police dear.....well penned

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Kathryn Dee 29 October 2008

Kyla, is this for real! ?

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Saint Cynosure 26 October 2008

This is an excellent piece of work...10+

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Carol Bryant 21 October 2008

Wow! A good poem moves the reader, and you most certainly did me~I pray for your soul to be healed by God's hand. Please tell someone who can help see that this doesn't happen to someone else. Nobody deserves that kind of pain..God Bless~Carol

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Heather Noble 21 September 2008

jeeze your only 12? ? ? you write really good keep up the good work dont let your poems go to waste you really should look into writing a book Love Always Heather

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Your only twelve and writing that good? Geeze! You got talent girl! This wont be a hobby for you much longer once some big time person comes and reads this. They will be like 'Huh, this girl has talent...Maybe we should ask her if she wants to make a book with her poems.' =) You got talent, and your not letting it go to waste I can see. =) Keep it up! Peace out, Lexi Baby

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Allysyn Bryant 07 September 2008

wow. this is written really well. good job chicka.

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Shilesha Johnson 05 September 2008

wow this poem is so deep. i love it. i felt a certain way. as if that was done to me. you have a way of writing something and making people feel it. this is one of the best poems i have ever came across. great job

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Cherry Bomb Kayla 02 September 2008

yes i found this poem very intersting and i liked the way u used ur words but is this really true?

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