A Second Train Song For Gary Comments

I leave my love with you I leave my love with you In this strange city... very fine poem. tony

no path is empty of love every though in second the love makes journey for every.....////

At night in cold new beds the welcomed strangers Achieve in memory the city's promise. I wake in love with you beautiful poem great 10++++++

Well descriptive poem on train journey has been astutely delineated by Jack Spicer. Beautiful poem. It is justified foe being chosen this poem as the modern poem of the poem of the day.

A poet who died too young.

I wake in love with you! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

TWO: the citizens of that strange city we call strangers, and so on and on. It depends from which side we look at the train. In fact a tender hllarious poem. Oh tad pity, Jack Spicer died very young, he reached only the age.of forty years Congratulations on being chosen as Modern Poem Of The Day. Also to his family in San Frisco, USA. May Jack Spicer rest in peace. Amen. A 10 and much more for the vote..

ONE: True accurate descriptions in this a Second Train Song for Gary, about A train, the citizens and its visitors and visa versa, since the train departs and returns again after some time, just like the cycle of life in a train´s driving history. It depends from which side we look at the train, because the train also goes to strange cities and

It's a very good poem with philosophical insight. Thanks for posting this poem. Chandan

O’ Train You’ve no time - to stay a while, to stop for little introduction. the strange speed pulls you to the strange future and all there – Strangers; the stranger! /// excellent great writing

I leave my love with you I leave my love with you In this strange city......so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem.

Such a wonderful poem by Gary Jack Spicer👍👍👍