I can only sit here in the dark,
crying because I missed the mark;
locked and too lazy to reach for the key,
as cold and numb as one could be.
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The symbolism is amazing. Ever line a different image but all with the same feeling....impressive and impactful.
Okay so the first, fourth and fifth stanzas are my favorites.......yea i know that more than half the poem lol. I like the illustrations you used, the key, a judge and burning....all very powerful and hit the point.
Wow! This took my breath away...I agree with alexis, the 1st,4th, & 5th stanzas are such powerful illusrtations. Captivating from beginning to end. This is one of my favorites by you! Going on my favorites list.