A Second Chance Comments
He looks up in the sky and asks God 'Will you please shine on me? '
He's restless because he knows there's a brighter pathway ahead
With tears in his eyes he tells God I wanna live for you and only you
You are the sun in my life
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well i think you v great chance of achieving glory friend! ! ! ! ! nice write indeed! ! ! with love shan
I think you did an awesome job! I agree with everything you said in this! keep it up! =) give it a 10!
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9/10/2025 7:07:04 PM # 1.0.0
Actually I thought that this was good. With a very important subject matter. You come to learn that sometimes you think a poem isnt that good and then people think its your best happened to me plenty of times