A Second Chance... Comments

It siomply means that you have not found your true love Your searches are leading you to fake lovers who do not linger on to see your worth Once they know you, they leave they have every right to leave and you can wait for the right lover who will not leave you who will get closer and closer till you reach in each other and become one

'Will hold a fresh start, To see life with a second chance...' Very nice idea. But is it possible? Love it.10+

Hey ric.... I really liked this incorporation of But..... It gives nice touch to the feelings expressed....

Let me add a stanza of my powm 'Girls please Listen' Male and Female magnetism is all by nature It’s not just in humans but also in entire species It’s the logic of proliferation of living creature Humans apply romance to this logic Worth, but don’t loose your balance over it. Your Second Chance shows the Balance. Keep going...

Only after the trial the real to be taken Trial teaches how to go about with real. Take this second chance into Real and move ahead. Its good see the courage in taking this second chance Life is after all a wonderful place to explore Where there are many more chances. You will know it in the days to come. Nice one.

Hello Rik...' Will hold a fresh start, To see life with a second chance... ' It is well reading... Kindest regards... Tsira

Really good work. It's all true. And all you need 'to see life with a second chance' is to take a step back.