Thursday, August 28, 2014

A Season Retreats... Comments

Rating: 5.0

As a season ends with no relief from the pangs
Awareness about a nation becomes a burden
The mushrooms of reliefs are dying out fast
With opposite thoughts in conflict...
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Roseann Shawiak 10 September 2014

An amazing and powerful poem Dinesh, you definitely hit home with this one! People have forgotten all about ethics and morals in this day and age, our children have no one to look up to and are lost among the evil ones. Our countries are falling to the terrorists and no one is doing anything, despair is rampant among good people, yet within their silent hearts they pray and try to hope for a total victory over all that is wrong in this world today.

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2014

A powerful write from your pen. Inflation hits the common people. Each day they think something better for tomorrow, but seeing the rising prices, their hope leads to despair. Seeing the inflation rising, we are moving only towards worst, especially if not brought under control or at least not rising further. I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Valsa George 29 August 2014

The promises made and the hopes induced are again and again broken. The commoners run on bricks in the sun (A very apt expression) Ethics and morals take a back seat. 'The arrested silence has the final laugh'(again a catchy expression) Yes, as you rightly put the final match is between Hope and Despair and we all wait for the match not to come to a draw but to see a clean victory over Despair! ! A very powerful write!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 August 2014

Keeping in view the present predicament of international scenario where in some, wars rule more than hearts, political and economic instability is a natural apprehension...... Dineshji.......we will remain mute spectators to these happenings and be crossing fingers between hope and despair......great write as always........

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